Hello 50501, I heard your valuable feedback and am back to present the redux of this design. Not much change, just some words. I included the original next to the new one just for reference. And now with color! I’m gonna call the colored ones the “marine edition” because my partner and his fellow marines said they liked the design but they’d like to see some color because “we like flashy stuff”. Not sure how the felt about the use of “fall” or “die”, so I included both.

To everyone in the original post, thank you so much for your feedback! I hope this does justice to your expectations. Any further feedback is encouraged! I want this to reach as many people as it can, so let me know what I can do to encourage you to share this amongst whoever you think needs to see it. Thank you guys, let’s stay UNITED!

Originally Posted By u/poohbear98_ At 2025-03-21 05:31:16 PM | Source